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Eerie Jungle

They were in the middle of nowhere Their small plane had just crashed the few supplies they had were to be treated with care the trio would now have to survive the jungle if they dared They set up camp on the jungle floor and went to sleep,tomorrow they would explore but in the middle of the night Lorna got bit by a huge snake the venom was now flowing more and more Her two companions hit the snake with a large stone killing it, Lorna now was turning blue she would soon die, and they would have to go on as they covered her body they said a prayer too The next morning they heard helicopters they quickly ran to a clearing to signal the rescuers they were pick up two hours later and flown to a nearby clinic where they got water They were glad to be alive but their friend didn't survive and when they recall that fateful day they shed a tear and silently pray By: Joseph May

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/27/2012 7:51:00 PM
I found this one back here that I had not seen before, Joseph. It reminds me of a movie I once saw! by the way, I saw your poem by accident, the one I think is meant for my contest. I had made it a rule for people to use the titles I had given in order not to avoid reading them before my judging. Since I have already seen yours, I hope you will put the title "caught in the sun" on it. (if it's for my contest) that way, if it written correctly, I can consider it for the contest! Luv, Andrea
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