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Eerie Green

The yard light is an eerie green
Sparkling like a bright star
Contrasted against the fog's veil
And solid clouds afar

The dampness in the morn's still air
Is only slightly cool
If the sun breaks through fog and clouds
A sauna then will rule

The Doves don't seem to mind the warmth
Crickets sing their delight
Other birds seem quiet still ~sleep
As though it were still night

The roosters crow trying to wake
The hidden sun from slumber
Crows come alive cawing warnings
Many are their numbers

Fog's thick veil settles, engulfs, wraps
Natural and manmade
Condensation falls covers all
Like One Cloud that stayed

Copyright © Sara Kendrick

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  1. Date: 8/10/2013 1:43:00 PM
    Great imagery in this poem! Well done! I enjoyed this, because it is like something that I would write myself. Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my work!

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 11:47:00 AM
    excellent. You make see the fog.

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 10:50:00 AM
    Ahhh you made me think of the all encompassing data CLOUD! Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 10:04:00 PM
    The word 'eerie' and 'green' put together in the title caught my attention. I'm glad it did. This is a beautiful poem. I can see everything so clearly. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 5:17:00 PM
    just love this, my friend - could imagine all this : )

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 4:36:00 PM
    This is a VERY good poem Sara....I can Invision every part of it....

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 4:08:00 PM
    eerie green and in between are thoughts from Sara's mind, ....of the cutest kind...

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 1:51:00 PM
    very nice, Sara. Fog is very eerie sometimes!! did you have it just as described by your poem recently?

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 11:00:00 AM
    this piece is so alive with words that color the scene so well,sara... the wonder of nature lives in you!.. greeat stuff!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 9:35:00 AM
    This is a tremendous nature inspired write my friend! You have delighted me by including the fog in another one of your works, that always brings a smile to my face Sara! Sorry it has been so Hot there this summer, it's been rather nice here this summer, we have been lucky this year! Still some more summer left to go but it looks good so far! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! What a powerful verse with piece really is, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 7:32:00 AM
    i like the way you paint the image of fog creeping in, enjoyed your write, ~always, Linda