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November.17.2023

Lanterne, Old or New Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Joseph May

eel slimy well streamlined lives in water fish

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Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 11/21/2023 5:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with your amazing write, very descriptive work Valsa!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2023 8:31:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Very creative and unique one. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2023 2:16:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful Lanterne in Joseph May's contest, Valsa :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/19/2023 7:58:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Eel" again. Have a blessed day/week......................

Joe Dimino

Date: 11/18/2023 12:26:00 PM

When I was young, I would fish for eels in the bay often. Flowered and fried~ very tasty. Not easy to get a grip on them once in the boat.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/18/2023 2:28:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on your well deserved win. I loved reading this dear valsa. Sending you light always

Joseph May

Date: 11/17/2023 7:27:00 PM

Congrats on your win Valsa, Very nicely done

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/17/2023 5:08:00 PM

a nicely done Lanterna, Valsa. I believe it's a good contest contender. This form is growing on me. Hope you're feeling a bit better. Hugs, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/17/2023 12:12:00 PM

Your "Eel" is a creative write. It was fun to read. Good Luck.... I also did is one. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away............

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/17/2023 11:55:00 AM

Valsa, you have executed this form with remarkable finesse! The imagery depicted within is truly exceptional! May fortune favor you and here's to a delightful Friday!

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/17/2023 11:20:00 AM

Valsa, though the thought of the subject matter royally creeps me out ( LOL), I have to say that you did a fantastic job with this form! Terrific imagery! Good luck and Happy Friday!!

Ink Empress

Date: 11/17/2023 9:15:00 AM

Oh this is very well described about eels. I always get a bit weird when i see them while snorkeling. You’ve explained what is an eel here so effortlessly. In few syllables. Insightful take, goodluck for the contest