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Edge of Wonder

At the edge of wonder where the tall grass lie drifts scents of ambrosia caressing my eye lands full of promise our futures now stay bestowed to us under a spring hued violet day Undressed in flowing waters clear as a crystal ball revealing almost everything but really nothing at all two young souls grasping at strawberry skies savoring the sugar rush as time floats on by Exotic breezes blow lost in a fervent embrace entwined hands and heartbeats held in place capturing memories filled with endless possibility creating fresh footprints heading toward civility

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/6/2017 9:30:00 PM
This poem is so good, is being stolen and plagiarized!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/6/2017 9:53:00 PM
Not me, might be Connie LOL
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/6/2017 9:37:00 PM
Checking out suspects.. you're on the list...lol
Date: 1/13/2017 12:27:00 PM
Just beautiful rhymes Tim, soo good!A7
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Date: 1/13/2017 10:46:00 AM
Wow! Back here after a long time. The best thing is, OPENING THE WORKS OF POETS YOU FOLLOW and reading their poems over a Mug of coffee. This is so melodious, so beautiful. A perfect poem of this perfect day x
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Date: 1/13/2017 9:52:00 AM
such a calming melody, tim, sigh!.. huggs
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Date: 1/13/2017 9:12:00 AM
what a moment, very vivid ;)
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Date: 1/13/2017 1:26:00 AM
Beautiful yet again Tim, great write!
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Date: 1/12/2017 10:24:00 PM
Read the comments below. Share the same thoughts. A 7 for you! :)
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Date: 1/12/2017 8:32:00 PM
Grasping at strawberry skies savouring the sugar rush-What a fantastic expression.Drifts scents of ambrosia caressing my eye-another exceptional line.How romantic this is Tim.Absolutely beautiful.A fave.
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Date: 1/12/2017 4:58:00 PM
A wonderful poem, Tim. I really enjoyed this one /|\
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Date: 1/12/2017 3:46:00 PM
Very nice, pulls the reader right in as it flows along! :)
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Date: 1/12/2017 3:45:00 PM
Enchanting Tim, loved the strawberry skies line, this has love's smile written all over it.
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