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Edge of Summers Crease Premiere Contest Winner

Sunshine drops a morning wink A soft warm breeze I sit and think Across the lake the mallards wait In southern skies a journeys date The oaks are hung in painted gold Where pretty words of praise are told Sounds of life along nature's path Wonders filled her righteous bath With guide of visions beauty blessed Through eyes of blue my soul's caressed I stroll near edges of summers crease The bluebirds sing and I'm at peace

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Date: 5/16/2017 1:48:00 PM
Lovely imagery in this poem, Tim. I love Autumn. Congrats on your win too!
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Date: 5/13/2017 6:06:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 5/12/2017 9:39:00 AM
Congrats Tim. Great work.
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Date: 5/12/2017 3:52:00 AM
Hey my friend, congretulations!!!!
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Date: 5/11/2017 9:53:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem and glad to see its a 1st! Can I spot winners or what? :)
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Date: 5/11/2017 6:00:00 PM
Big congratulations on your win, Tim. Nature brings out very tranquil feelings....
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Date: 5/11/2017 2:42:00 PM
Dear Tim, WOW, it wasn't so much your writing skills that earned you the top spot. I was lost/yet felt every moment, you pinned on this delightful WAKE. I love when I find myself absorbing the sun, with my eyes close. have yourself and awesome day. Congratulations :) SKAT
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Date: 5/11/2017 2:48:00 PM
Thanks Skatarina ...great to see you here : ))
Date: 9/16/2016 5:13:00 PM
Brings a smile to face. Saving this in my favs.
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Date: 9/15/2016 2:59:00 PM
This keeps summer in the heart and mind. Enjoyed so much. Love, daver
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Date: 9/14/2016 6:17:00 AM
Great imagery... Beautifully written....
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Date: 9/14/2016 4:04:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem. Great imagery. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks fro sharing it.
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Date: 9/14/2016 12:19:00 AM
Came to read this again, only to say, when we bring hope we bring new days!
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Date: 9/13/2016 7:50:00 PM
You bring light to the darkness!
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Date: 9/13/2016 12:42:00 PM
Beautiful poem of nature and it's tranquility. Those early morning moments of solace always prepare me for whatever may come my way that day. Sounds wonderful Tim. Enjoyed the peaceful read:)
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Date: 9/13/2016 12:24:00 PM
Such a beautiful gentle poem and the imagery is so lovely:-) hugs Jan xx
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