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Eden

An apple bitten, Exiled from the garden of love, Innocently wise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/12/2019 7:47:00 PM
Congrats on your win, William. Well done.
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Date: 3/4/2019 5:58:00 PM
LOVE this. The last line is perfection. Congrats. I'd give it first place!
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Date: 3/4/2019 11:05:00 AM
I have read your Haiku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 3/4/2019 7:12:00 AM
Nice write, William. Congratulations on your win. Charlie
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Date: 3/4/2019 4:32:00 AM
- Congratulations William, on your 2nd place in this sweet contest: I Love U 2 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/27/2019 12:18:00 PM
Deep true, inspirational... James
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