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Eddie On His Country Stroll

Hey I just love the countryside it's so peaceful and full of calm even when I don't meet a single soul but come across a working farm One time with the sun so bright sweat was so prominent on my face but the warmth was worth it all a great start to the day in my place Usually, I like being just on my own but this day I met Edith on route we got chatting about country life finding both loved to be on foot So Eddie(me) and Edith loved being together especially walking seeing lovely scenes romantic thoughts enter their hearts a future together makes them keen So both continue to love a stroll hand in hand along step by step being thankful for where they met finding love within their lover's net!

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Date: 4/4/2023 8:54:00 AM
A most enjoyable walk, Gordon. Thanks for allowing us to tag along.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 4/4/2023 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, Glad you enjoyed walking along with me, hope all is well with you. Regards, Gordon
Date: 4/4/2023 1:54:00 AM
Lovely poem sprinkled with romance, Gordon:)
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 4/4/2023 8:30:00 AM
Thanks Joanna, Glad you enjoyed this piece and trust all is well with you. Blessings, Gordon
Date: 4/3/2023 2:05:00 PM
A romantic country stroll, I love the peace of the countryside Gordon away from the hustle and bustle of the cities and towns. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 4/3/2023 2:11:00 PM
Thanks Tom, yes there's something about the countryside that brings peace. All is well here, trust things are good with you. Blessings,Gordon

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