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in this place now here in the safety of this languid afternoon I close my eyes and listen to her voice her sigh with your hand on my thigh knowing as I do that there is no pretense or disguise no need to hide I am who I am She assures me It's fine Awash in need I let my body plead I care to dare every hindrance to disappear because I deserve to let the woman in me be free to feel Ecstasy makes her appeal: "Make it REAL" roles reversed in revelry the pleaser now yearning to be pleased the giver becomes the receiver and all is as it's meant to be for you and me I let my thoughts fly no earth and no sky nothing matters forgotten the where and why no need to be shy nothing except this build up sensations born of feelings this surging urge for sensual supremacy to be to arrive knowing it will come knowing the world will stop as it has before wanting it again, once more pausing at the pinnacle of passion's pride all things having been played right as it should be release of pain of hurt of everything... everything but Ecstasy who prolongs her stay I don't chase her away I hold on let her play have her way in the wake of her spray I lay Sated sigh on my high I cry eyes closed slowly slowly... She loosens my hold and with kisses on my face she starts to recede back into the realm of fantasy freed echoes of "I love you" coming through the haze starts to lift and I drift...I drift fingers in my hair kisses everywhere Ecstasy exhausted my eyes flutter open to see my life back in focus it resides there in your eyes my destiny Let it be Oh, let it be Always... Ecstasy and you and me Eileen Manassian

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/13/2016 6:42:00 PM
Such passion. A beautiful write Eileen.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/15/2016 1:37:00 AM
Passion....who can live without it? Thanks, James. Hugs
Date: 6/13/2016 6:26:00 PM
Best Congratulations Eileen on the POTD honor!! A most powerful and passionate write for sure. All The Best . . . Gary
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/15/2016 1:38:00 AM
Thanks, Gary. I'm truly surprised at how this came about. It's not a poem that has man views. I'm not complaining. :) Hugs
Date: 6/13/2016 4:33:00 PM
"Passion Poetically Personified!" An eyebrow raiser! :-) Congrats on this POTD Eileen!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/15/2016 1:39:00 AM
Thanks, Walter. I've raised my share of eyebrows in the past. It's still within limits, I believe. :) Thanks for the visit.
Date: 6/13/2016 11:56:00 AM
* * * * CONGRATULATIONS * * * *
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/13/2016 12:02:00 PM
Thanks, Sunshine!!! :) Love ya!
Date: 6/13/2016 11:13:00 AM
Congrats Eileen on POTD!!!...well done...god bless...^WW^
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/13/2016 11:24:00 AM
Really? On THIS piece? I really don't know how TPS does this. This doesn't even have as many views as my two latest ones, but thanks for letting me know. :) I appreciate it.
Date: 6/13/2016 9:28:00 AM
damn...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/13/2016 11:26:00 AM
Ummmmmmm.....
Date: 6/11/2016 10:31:00 PM
Ok now I am back and can say, wow!!!! Loved this!!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2016 11:57:00 AM
:)))) ... A QUICK SHOWER :)))
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/13/2016 11:27:00 AM
Thanks, dear. Well, I have to live up to the name....The Queen of Passion. ;) Hugs
Date: 6/11/2016 10:30:00 PM
I need to go take a shower, brb!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/13/2016 11:27:00 AM
You are funny, Arthur. Make sure it's a cold shower. Hugs
Date: 6/11/2016 6:35:00 PM
Wowzer, this is beyond ooh la la! I had trouble reading it because my screen got all steamed up.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/13/2016 11:26:00 AM
Thanks, Richard. :) That's kind of what happened to my screen when I read your Liquid Dreams Rated R. ;) Still one of my favorite of yours. Hugs
Date: 6/11/2016 4:34:00 PM
Steamy and beautiful!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/13/2016 11:25:00 AM
:) Thanks, Tom. Hadn't written a passionate piece for a time. Glad you liked this.
Date: 6/11/2016 12:10:00 PM
WoW...i love it Eileen...i was swimming in your words with a fountain of imagery and alliteration cascading all around me...a fave
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/11/2016 1:01:00 PM
:) Thanks, Tim. I'm so glad you liked it. I haven't written a passionate piece in a while. Felt good to get it out of my system. Hope all is well. Thanks for faving it. Hugs
Date: 6/11/2016 11:58:00 AM
- An intoxication of romance and love ... "Oh, let it be ... Always" .... - Lovely poem my friend Eileen :) - (7) - hugs and happy weekend :) // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/11/2016 12:36:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine... :) I haven't written a passionate piece in a while. Felt something was missing. I'm glad you enjoyed it, dear. hugs

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