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Eclipsed By Your Light

Whispering echoes magic dust soul's mate breathless wonder aired peace within an eternal halo promise sings Until time itself ends inside forever loved circling trust colours salt of the sands running out pure golden time captured Holding precious memories sparked together warmly lighting gems behind a veil pink blushing fire spells cast enchanting One shooting star that always welds kisses unto your diamond treasured heart's lip's dining under the candlelight of night unrhymed tercets

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Akkina Downing

Date: 11/11/2016 5:55:00 PM

Liam, This is one my favorite by you! Such a romantic dreamy poem a lady would love to read nightly ;)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/27/2016 6:58:00 AM

Excellent. Great imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/24/2016 6:01:00 PM

Absolutely stunning Liam and that final line just blew me away its amazing imagery:-) Hugs Jan xx 7

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/24/2016 5:56:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^