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'eclipsed'

her splendor unseen now eclipsed by corrosion statue in the rain ©231220111815

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Kim Merryman

Date: 6/17/2013 8:01:00 PM

An excellent senryu, Wilma! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/17/2013 10:52:00 AM

Oh yes.......I love this. The hardest forms are the shorter ones....you have made this look easy!! Congratulations!

Elaine George

Date: 6/17/2013 5:34:00 AM

Sensational Senryu dear Wilma. Congrats on your so well deserved win. Lainie

Joseph May

Date: 6/16/2013 3:12:00 PM

congrats on your win win Wilma

Rick Parise

Date: 6/16/2013 1:50:00 PM

Enjoyed The Imagery-!- Congrats to you!!!!God Bless........................

Kash Poet

Date: 3/4/2012 10:58:00 AM

Loved it first time around Wilma.Congratulations on your win.

Bob Quigley

Date: 3/4/2012 8:27:00 AM

A lot said in a few words. Congratulations Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/4/2012 6:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this excellent piece Wilma. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/3/2012 9:40:00 PM

WILMA, Congratulations with your wonderful entry IN RICK'S CONTEST ;-) well done~ALWAYS PD*

Rick Parise

Date: 3/3/2012 7:01:00 PM

A great picture painted. ~CONGRATS to you!!!Truly Enjoyed!!~God bless ~ ^Rick

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/27/2011 6:49:00 PM

A really good piece to read here Wilma..! thanks for the post..)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/26/2011 6:10:00 AM

Your Poetry has a picture show that is drawn in words... That make you a special Poet.... always amazed by you work... luv and hugs Michael

John Rhinem

Date: 12/26/2011 12:03:00 AM

Smile ˜ Well, then this definitely wouldn't be about your precious heart * My dear beautiful Wilma ˜ Hopefully should this stirring moment amid verse hold truth than * May this girls priceless life thaw as in an iceful solution cleansing ˜ The breath of light, to breathe into her love * A late yet sincere * Christmas Wish * May your perfect beauties dreams forever You See ˜ My love, always & forever, John!:) ˜

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2011 9:20:00 PM

Super Wilma... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2011 4:31:00 PM

I love this. If it used the word rust, it could even be for that rust contest!!

Jack Horne

Date: 12/23/2011 2:41:00 PM

I just love this clever write, Wilma - I can picture this statue that has seen better days. A definite winner, if for a contest, my friend. lfde for Christmas, and always

Kash Poet

Date: 12/23/2011 10:29:00 AM

This is a gem from you Wilma.Rick is going to like it sure.Best wishes.