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Eclipse Reality

When confronted with lost love, emotions morph into tears. And fragmented fantasies fuel imagination. Mourning innocence's demise, you reevaluate trust. And take stock of spent wishes left at the fringes of youth. Passion's promise echoes deep within your lonely heart. Yet, the illusion of love can't eclipse reality. Drowning in a sea of tears, love dies, and yet, hope survives. And offers yesterday's dreams free passage to tomorrow. (Blank Verse) 6/24/2015

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/6/2018 8:37:00 PM

Well done, Emile. This is the stanza I love most: "Mourning innocence’s demise you reevaluate trust. And take stock of spent wishes left at the fringes of youth."

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/7/2018 9:11:00 AM

Thanks Line. I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/25/2015 4:06:00 PM

Hi Emile! This is a very good poem written in flowing free verse. Nothing wrong with crying over lost love, but then, once tears stop, it's time to move on! #7 // paul

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/25/2015 4:45:00 PM

Thanks Paul, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/24/2015 11:39:00 PM

Hope is very important as you say in this work and I like the picture you chose to go with it. Yes, my poem had a typo which you noticed and I corrected it. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/25/2015 10:47:00 AM

Thanks Matthew, I appreciate your support. Emile.