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Format Of The Eclipse, Danger of sunlight on my lips, My eyes filled with terror, Deceit fill my heat What goes around comes around, so that gravity may put me back on my feet The moonlight on my hands The stars up above, A twister filled twilight with only seductive love

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Date: 4/22/2016 2:33:00 PM
A lovely poem Charlene...Welcome to the Soup..
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Date: 4/19/2016 11:08:00 PM
Charlene Plummer, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/18/2016 10:42:00 PM
Hi Charlene, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs.
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Date: 4/18/2016 8:35:00 PM
This is dope , i ilkes
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Date: 4/18/2016 8:15:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Charlene. :)
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