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Echos of my mind

Tennis shoe threads mark
A path in the fresh trail dirt
Climbing to where the air thins

A grave stone is placed
Where grand forefathers once stepped
History in a hillside

Apex reached, voice booms
I was here, ere, ere, ere, ere

Copyright © Sandra Hudson

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  1. Date: 6/23/2009 7:45:00 PM
    Twisting was cool, with a girl named Jewel, make no mistake, she could bake a cake, but she was no fool, slim and proper, sweet as a candy wrapper, She went to school,no way to stop her! This is the end, of this poet's gen, my friend! God bless

  1. Date: 5/6/2009 6:20:00 AM
    Nice Sandra! I could hear your echo. :) Thanks for visiting.

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 9:18:00 AM
    Great poem, Sandra! And great entry to the contest. Best wishes. Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/28/2009 8:06:00 PM
    We all leave a mark, a trace of history in our wake as we pass through life. Love the way you used the "echo" to evoke this sense of lasting impact. Profound writing!

  1. Date: 4/28/2009 5:59:00 PM
    Thanks for supporting my contest Sandra...Raul