Get Your Premium Membership

Echoes On the Mist

Listen intently to echoes wafting off the mist of exalted mountains whispering, as designed poetry 'neath ether rapturously incites secrets of versed journeys' resolve while quintessence reawakens 'tween passages of stardust and eclipsed lunar moons, knowledge of a lofty universe lavishing abundant resources, whorling sumptuous seascapes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/10/2017 5:59:00 PM
The title drew me in...your words invoke the sense of mystic and wonder that I think was necessary for a poem like this. It makes me want to listen more intently to those whispering mountains. ;) Pretty one, Paloma. Always, Laura
Login to Reply
Date: 11/5/2016 11:59:00 AM
A pleasant and sweet vacation from the day. Thank you Paloma.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/2/2016 12:17:00 AM
Another beauty Paloma! I always appreciate your work ! : ) 7
Login to Reply
Date: 11/1/2016 8:43:00 PM
Hey, Paloma, I hear those echoes all the time in my head. Great poem I might add. You can be my shrink anytime. Love your work, lady. Love and peace always. RW
Login to Reply
Date: 11/1/2016 5:48:00 PM
Love your work! And this is clearly an example of why. You are quite a prolific writer I might add too. Can I borrow your Muse for awhile? Haha
Login to Reply
P  Avatar
Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 6:22:00 PM
Much appreciate your kind words Rick! My muse can be a witch with a b, if you catch my drift, you sure about that? :)
Date: 11/1/2016 3:39:00 PM
such beautiful words you have melded together here, Paloma. Great title for this!
Login to Reply
P  Avatar
Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 6:21:00 PM
Many thanks Andrea! :)
Date: 10/31/2016 5:15:00 PM
A musical poem written very beautifully. my compliments, Paloma
Login to Reply
P  Avatar
Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 9:33:00 AM
Many thanks Ralph.
Date: 10/31/2016 10:06:00 AM
I hear them, Paloma. Beautiful poem:)
Login to Reply
P  Avatar
Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 9:36:00 AM
So happy you did my friend! :)
Date: 10/31/2016 10:00:00 AM
The echoes in the mist indeed reveal secrets..versed on a journey between lands..amd seas..Lovely Paloma.
Login to Reply
P  Avatar
Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 9:35:00 AM
Thanks so much Charmaine.
Date: 10/31/2016 9:51:00 AM
This one is amazingly beautiful, Paloma:) loved each line:)
Login to Reply
P  Avatar
Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 9:35:00 AM
Thanks so much Jo. :)
Date: 10/31/2016 9:44:00 AM
"whorling sumptuous seascapes" Loved that line, it is the perfect finale to an amazing piece of work. When your pen whispers, I always listen, mist or not. Beautiful Paloma.
Login to Reply
P  Avatar
Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 9:35:00 AM
Thrilled to read your review Chris, much thanks.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things