Get Your Premium Membership

Echoes of You

For me the sun has closed her eyes Never to rise again Darkness is all that surrounds me now Darkness and echoes of pain I'm on a journey to nowhere The road is narrow and long Walking alone, I stumble and fall With echoes of you and our song I try to look to the future, but I may just as well be blind The absence of you is all that I see Echoes of you so defined Confusion and pain, my constant friends They never leave me alone Reminders of all that you and I shared Echoes I cannot disown Today or tomorrow will never be mine I live in a dark, sad place The past, not the present, is all I can see In the echoes of your lovely face Emotional scars are invisible But the damage is built to last I wonder, will I ever be free From echoes of you and the past... By Raina Hutchins

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/7/2012 5:42:00 PM
I agree with the comments. I love the concept you painted for us: "echoes of pain" : it is (to me) eerie and chilling -- in the best sense of course. I like the emotional power you emanate. Always, Laura
Login to Reply
Date: 2/19/2012 11:54:00 AM
i think we have all been here you have captured the feeling brilliantly ~always p.d.
Login to Reply
Hutchins Avatar
Raina Hutchins
Date: 2/23/2012 3:51:00 PM
THank you so much for you comment, it is greatly appreciated...Raina x

Book: Reflection on the Important Things