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Out on the porch in morn's coolness Echoes of a symphony sing Doves a hollow wind slowly blown Mockingbirds a tambourine Song bird voices violin strings Gently struck with a bow As a soft illuminating Yellow sun rises so slow Stillness hovers; only faint air movement, will the coolness go Will this day be a scorcher with hot humid hours and no air flow? Wispy clouds fan brushed near the sun A touch of promised rain If only there would be showers to dissipate heat's pain!!

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Date: 6/23/2016 8:04:00 PM
I love that last stanza. Great note to end it on, hoping for the rain!!
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Date: 6/23/2016 12:17:00 PM
- Rain that cleans the summer air ... lovely written Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/23/2016 8:42:00 AM
We need the showers here too, this was a well said soothing look into your morning. I felt like I was on a porch swing taking it all in. :)
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Date: 6/23/2016 7:25:00 AM
Lovely description of sunrise, Sarah. Barry
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