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Echo Your Empathy

You’re my star – I set fire to our firey rose Bouquet of stars – I hand to you – We’re opposites, like poetry and prose You came out of the blue, I’m left without a clue! It all came so soon – the package of surprises All along, you were echoing your leave Anybody out there to help me? Hello? I can’t hear your echo Your echo is what keeps me on my feet I’m a believer…I’m getting discreet Around and round and round, We’re going round in circles We’re doing freestyle singing Swinging side by side…back and forth, Our fate keeps on swinging… Who will fill in the gaps? I never saw the light in goodbye… I’m caving in my ruins…I’m caving in my ruins I admit it – I can’t live without you, Lingering around me like a fly, enchanted by the lightbulb What am I supposed to do with this work of art? I’ve stumbled upon you and fell in love with you But, I’m lost in paradise – dropping levels – there’s mistakes we can’t undo There’s no perfect peace with the world falling at the seams, kissing the debris, Screwing with my head…you won’t ever see a trace of tears on my face – I’m left to be All alone, all along…but without you, I’m stranded in the wilderness… Giving me night-scares instead of dreams of reality I can’t hear your echo of empathy…I can hear chaos unraveling; I can hear the commotion of the ocean Falling victim to bittersweet emotion I can’t hear your echo of empathy…I can barely make out any hope in store I miss living my dream! I keep tell you that! – and all you do is ignore I’m on edge and I get upset and cry my eyes out No one can love this monster, but I won’t accept such foolishness I strayed from my heart’s passion and I got all the symptoms Of a guy with a solitary, silver soul….you stole my dignity My pride, my surreal sensations, my innocence Don’t dismiss me as nonsense Echo your empathy… I’m brokenhearted, but I won’t reveal it to you – you never felt for me So, don’t even bother to ask me why I’m crying? ’Cause I’ll never give you the full truth Almost all my life, I’ve been searching for the woman I love…and to find my heart’s tune But, love didn’t seem like enough – good luck will shower upon me soon You and I will view the astounding full moon… Find your way out of the maze of bewilderment I’m treading this rocky road with or without you – I can’t stand tall You are playing games with me, nourishing my resentment I’m swimming home – underneath the surface, feeling oh so blue Feeling the rejection…the jaded corruption banging at my skull I heard you screaming out my name Are you echoing your praise to me? Are you covering up my shame? Are you echoing my empathy? Echo your empathy… my delightful dolphin in the sea I’m screaming at the top of my lungs When I close my eyes, everything seems so fine Is my love good enough for you? I can hear you echo your empathy My voice is fading and dying out, but you’re my baby… My darling angelic friend of mine Our friendship mixed with love is as succulent as wine Listen to my echoes of my appreciation towards you I could make out your echo of empathy Echo your empathy of ecstasy! Give me your all…whisper in my ears I’ve been lost for many-a-years Come out of your black hole and resuce from my demise Echo your empathy upon me if can be so kind and wise Pursue our zealous goals and we’ll echo our triumph I don’t wanna bleed without you I don’t wanna breathe without you I wanna see your face, glistening with grace Gleaming with grace and I feel like I can beat this race I feel so alive for the first time in a lifetime For the first time in forever, you make me feel happy and oh so sublime Our exaltation is beyond amazing… I can’t get yah out of my head You’re my lullaby – I set fire to the pitch-black sky and I ascend so wondrously The firey rose – I give it to you – it’s a gift that’s articulate and almost flawless You blossomed like a precious rose in the Garden of Glory We’re opposites, like black and white, but you and I will never kiss the abyss Echo your empathy…my munificent maid! You’ve grown so much, miss! I can’t put my mind to bed…it’s racing with thoughts of you always and forever It’s racing with thoughts, blooming so true Echo your words of wisdom and hide not in shadows anymore (your hope’s a blur) – Come out of your shell and stop being so insecure Echo your empathy and you’ll be part of my crew

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/28/2018 1:45:00 PM
"Wow, I am blown away with this masterpiece from 2014, JW.. You are mega talented !! Your writing is incredibly amazing.. I absolutely love your free verse!! Your a shining star.. Coming from your heart and soul!! Blessings to you, JW!"
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Date: 5/28/2018 11:53:00 PM
Thank you to the max! Will be posting more poetry. Free verse is what I'm best at...love it so much. Just pours out of me like rain that clusters in the clouds and collapses. Hopefully, my light doesn't dim as a star. I will shine for the sake of others', bless you xo -JWE
Date: 6/2/2014 12:35:00 PM
David yet another incredible write so full of passion and emotion and so romantic - totally awesome. You have an incredible future ahead of you as a writer my young friend. Hugs as ever Jan xxx
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Date: 6/7/2014 3:07:00 AM
I know I didn't necessarily cover everything up in my life and my writing life, but you get my drift! I write with my might and so do you!). (SORRY! SUCH A LONG COMMENT ON HERE.) Me being a writer and all, it's not at all a surprise! hehe xD
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Date: 6/7/2014 3:06:00 AM
Being a writer has its tough and easy times (x But I enjoy most of what I do in poetry (everything I write has something to do with what I'm feeling at that moment and it's been inspired by some event at least or some dilemma I'm facing...
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Date: 6/7/2014 3:04:00 AM
Oh yeah - I knew what it meant and yes, He has inspired me to the core. God, my father, is who I look up to (though not all the time unfortunately...but I try to communicate to Him best I can with passion and humility and patience - I need work on commitment, so He can bestow more miracles upon me and my family and everyone else in contact with us and beyond!).
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Date: 6/7/2014 3:03:00 AM
Awww.... thanks from the bottom of my heart. You are talented all the way too! My parents don't write poetry persay (my mom writes schedules and maybe a couple of verses...who knows - I should ask, huh?). My dad is a teacher and writes out plans for his elem. school students haha (does that count??).
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Date: 6/3/2014 12:44:00 AM
I cannot believe you are only 17 David - such an incredible talent - I know your sister writes - do you parents too. You have the same name as my son - means 'beloved of God' and boy someone up there gave you this incredible talent my friend. Hugs as ever Jan xx
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Date: 6/2/2014 8:14:00 PM
XOXO from CA, my friend. (x
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Date: 6/2/2014 8:13:00 PM
Thank you with all my heart. (x Glad you thought it was incredible. Took some time and effort to write this one, but worth it after all...it came out swell and awesome as people say on here.
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Date: 6/2/2014 8:13:00 PM
Yes! All those emotions you named are absolutely correct. I am not currently in love, but I was before...I know love at first glance and all that bad romance. xD I wish you were write - get it? Not as great as Shakespeare or Rowling, but getting there! -DWB
Date: 6/1/2014 7:36:00 PM
Wow this poem is awesome I had to read it 2 times....its full of so much emotion it made my heart melt and It takes alot for a poem to do that to me WOW-Love Ettie
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Date: 7/6/2014 8:23:00 PM
Wow. I do that when reading a poem too - twice or three times in fact. I forget things right off the bat the first time. These emotions are raw, heartfelt and powerful, ain't they? Thanks for commenting once again xD -DWB ps: your poems are awesome too

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