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Ebony and Phonics

Ebony and Phonics Talkin’ Jive, slippin’ inta the ethnic eccentricities of survival, hip-hop, rap, the blues, Ebonics. Ebonics, the melding of Ebony and Phonics into a language that could be spoken within hearing of the overseer. Genius spoken here, clandestine communication lines strung in plain view. News flashes, who ran, who escaped, who was sent and where, who was sold. Assumed “ignorance” displaying pure brilliance before an unconscious audience. Ebonics, a language shaped by hardships and prejudice, now reduced to phrases and a chant-like mockery of its necessity and protection. Ebonics, a language that preserved a spirit, nurtured a fierce independence, fed the flames of rage and the hopes of love. Ebonics, a tribute to a tenacious desire to be free, not from the chains, but from the bondage of the chains. Free to communicate their deepest thoughts, their hidden loves, their seething hates. Ebonics, lost key to railroads underground, doors no longer found, generations in search of freedom’s sound. John G. Lawless 8/16/2014 for Verlena S. Walker Ebonics – Let’s do Some Slang contest

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Date: 8/26/2014 10:57:00 PM
I dig reading these Ebonics takes. Yours was very different and had some historical lessons and opinions, Strange how the only line I didn't agree with stuck out the most. This is not a bad thing, for if we all agreed on everything, how robotically boring would that be? Keep on bringin' the WORD!
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Date: 8/26/2014 10:16:00 PM
I enjoyed the informative tale with a message, Congrats, John
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Date: 8/26/2014 7:42:00 PM
So true, man should never forget the cost of cheap labor - people around the globe have made it a practice to enslave each other and it is NEVER right or justified, economics nor power is a justification for behaving "less than human!" BUT the mind can never be truly controlled it will always find a way to be FREE! Congrads Light & Love
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John Lawless
Date: 8/26/2014 10:09:00 PM
Debbie, always good to hear(or read) you insightful responses. Thanks for the kind words.
Date: 8/26/2014 6:06:00 PM
a wonderful tribute to the spirit of Ebonics reflecting the travails of common people in search of freedom. congrats for top win. Mohan
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John Lawless
Date: 8/26/2014 10:07:00 PM
Thanks Mohan for stopping by and commenting.
Date: 8/26/2014 5:53:00 PM
Wonderful, I like the story behind ebonics, it really is an art, and you have told of it so well. This is definatly a first place piece well done!
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John Lawless
Date: 8/26/2014 10:07:00 PM
Casarah, I have multi racial children and grand children so it was necessary to learn and share their history and culture with them from both sides. Not an easy thing to do in these times.
Date: 8/26/2014 3:17:00 PM
this is wonderful and informative. well worthy of top spot. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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John Lawless
Date: 8/26/2014 10:10:00 PM
Joyce, thanks for visiting and commenting. I haven't had time to read all the poems that placed in the contest.
Date: 8/26/2014 12:58:00 PM
very clever write many congrats on your top spot:-) Hugs jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 8/26/2014 10:00:00 PM
Good to hear from you Jan, I've been falling a little behind with my comments and responses
Date: 8/26/2014 12:25:00 PM
Beautiful. I just love it. A huge congratulations with Lots of hugs, Gina
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Date: 8/26/2014 12:14:00 PM
Excellent write for a well-deserved TOP win! Please accept my congratulations, John!
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John Lawless
Date: 8/26/2014 9:58:00 PM
congratulations accepted and appreciated, Pandita. Thanks you for checking in.
Date: 8/26/2014 10:02:00 AM
Well done John. I love the edification you brought. You show me that you could slang and then you improved upon the knowledge of what Ebonics is all about. Again, congratulations on your first place win. /s/Verlena S. Walker
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John Lawless
Date: 8/26/2014 10:02:00 PM
Verlena, this was a fantastic "Prompt" or "Theme" for a poem. It took considerable reflection on my part to allow the spirit of the theme to find an appropriate expression. Thank you for such a challenge.
Date: 8/16/2014 11:52:00 AM
Excellent!!!
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John Lawless
Date: 8/16/2014 12:04:00 PM
Terry, thanks for reading and commenting.

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