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Ebb Tide

EBB TIDE We’d had an angry tearful spat Don’t remember over what: Stormed out of house down to beach. Needed to clear my mind For a few moments out of his reach: Sniff air, breeze, spray - unwind. Afternoon ebb tide girl - Slow swash of rollers: break and curl Of sand-filled muddy-brown swells, Remnants of soapy foam, scummy rubble, Shallow rattle of empty shells; Cold slow plop of pebbles, Where the furious morning breakers had died Among the the rising billows’ wet tide, Assaulting the dry beach, Hurling mud and packed sand And hard little stones up the reach At the cliff beyond the strand. Sweeping all the gravel over the lee, On the smooth flat strand the shallow sea Healed the wet beach: glassy shine - Clear, cleansed, soothed with balm. My heelprints filled quick and quiet with brine, As I turned for home, calm.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/30/2011 12:04:00 PM
you just gotta hit the breeze, syd... a piece so seamless, it overflows with inner rhythm! wow, how did you steal this poem of mine?? kidding! if for a contest, you'll win 10 notches down mine, lol! well done! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/30/2011 4:35:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this exceptional piece of poetry this morning Sydney. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2011 1:41:00 PM
Syd, when we need to clear our heads, the beach is a great place to do it. Sometimes just being in touch with nature can restore the serenity. I can appreciate the way you felt "cleansed and soothed" after taking this walk. Peace to you, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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