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He bought his wife fake Chanel Number Five It smelled like a skunk - no longer alive! Just one whiff and he knew Eau de ‘Pepe la Pew’ From clenched fists he would have to duck and dive! 20th May 2015

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James Fraser

Date: 5/29/2015 5:51:00 PM

And he hadn't a sniff what was coming to him. Loved this cartoon from years ago - love it Jan, James xxxx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2015 5:54:00 PM

lol thanks James:-) Hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/25/2015 6:10:00 AM

Oh, I do love Monsieur Le Pew. Great limerick.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2015 6:19:00 AM

Thanks so much ML:-) Hugs Jan xx

Thomas Martin

Date: 5/24/2015 11:15:00 AM

What a sense of humor and penned so well!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2015 1:13:00 PM

Thanks Thomas I think Catie will have a tough job with this contest I have seen some fabulous funny entries:-) Hugs Jan xx

May Sara

Date: 5/22/2015 8:03:00 AM

Haha very funny!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2015 9:28:00 AM

Thanks so much May:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 5/21/2015 3:41:00 PM

LOL..gotta say I always felt a bit sorry for that cat in the cartoon. but loved this Lim!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/21/2015 3:43:00 PM

LOL :-) Hugs Jan xx

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/21/2015 4:13:00 AM

Excellent and funny write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Jan Allison
Date: 5/21/2015 6:36:00 AM

Thanks so much for dropping by Ravi:-) Hugs Jan xx

Gabby Sabre

Date: 5/21/2015 2:26:00 AM

I needed this to brighten my day. Still laughing now!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/21/2015 6:36:00 AM

Glad I made you smile Gabby:-) Hugs Jan xx

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 5/20/2015 11:21:00 PM

Ha ha ah!!! So funny Jan, excellent write, your poem is sweet as always.......stay blessed..........);Afolabi.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/21/2015 1:15:00 AM

Thanks Afolabi:-) Hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/20/2015 8:16:00 PM

G'day Jan... I have heard rumours that the smell of a skunk can be off-putting, and now you've put up something worse... fake CN5 - thanks for the warning - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 5/21/2015 1:15:00 AM

LOl Thanks Lindsay:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2015 7:28:00 PM

Cute title for this fragrant write, sweetie!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/21/2015 1:14:00 AM

I love to play with my titles - one of the reason's I don't want to change it and put it in Catie's contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 5/20/2015 5:54:00 PM

That's what I call a HA HA and a Half...

Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2015 5:58:00 PM

Oh dear - a only ha ha and a half - I must do better next time! Hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/20/2015 5:37:00 PM

lol! Missed your sense humour! 7. See, I even spelled it right for you... :-) 'Night night, Jan. hugs!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2015 5:50:00 PM

LOL Thanks Kim - had fun with this one:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 5/20/2015 5:21:00 PM

This is great Jan.,....change he and his wife to Lou and honey.....and enter it

Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2015 5:35:00 PM

That Tim is a great idea lol - I have written 2 more already - will think on it lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 5/20/2015 4:11:00 PM

Jan. ..so funny. ..well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem. .lasagna

Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2015 4:14:00 PM

Wish I could enter it in Catie's contest but it doesn't fit the theme - guess I'm going to have to write another one now lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/20/2015 3:54:00 PM

Haha funny. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2015 3:56:00 PM

Thanks Cas:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 5/20/2015 1:46:00 PM

Very witty, Jan, and the ‘Pepe la Pew’ eau is priceless! Thank you for the laugh:) hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2015 3:14:00 PM

I had fun with this one Paul - just a seed of an idea and wham this was the result:-) Glad it made you smile:-) Hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/20/2015 1:06:00 PM

cracking me up, jan!...is this for john's contest?... you are a humorist; so fine!.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2015 3:13:00 PM

Just a fun write Nette - I got this idea in my head and this was the result lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Nandita Das

Date: 5/20/2015 12:19:00 PM

LOL. Great humour. Cant get funnier than this. Loved this limerick. A#7

Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2015 3:12:00 PM

Thanks Nandita - just a stupid thing I got in my head and this was the result lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/20/2015 12:07:00 PM

- Too much of a good thing :))) ..... only real thing for a skunk !!! :)))) (7) - Have the soup been "down" today ..... posted a new poem today .... many "readers" no comments ..... or a "bad" poem? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2015 3:12:00 PM

I agree Anne lise - think we should mail soup and suggest it - with more and more people joining the site and flooding with 10 poems makes our one or two poems shoot off the page so quickly:-) Hugs janxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/20/2015 12:25:00 PM

- I have always meant that there should be a limit on max 3 poems pr. day :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2015 12:11:00 PM

yes site has been down - few reads few comments and if people post 10 poems a day gives less air time for us:-( Hugs Jan xx

Kevin Leake

Date: 5/20/2015 11:52:00 AM

Ha, Ha, Ha, Love it Jan, Great Limerick, your sense of humour keeps me going God Bless Kevin

Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2015 11:56:00 AM

Thanks Kevin - I can just imagine a guy buying some 'knock off' perfume and this being the result! Hugs jan xx