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Eating Fire Yet Feeling No Burns

Eating Fire But Feeling No Burns My life ran with many twists and turns I ate fire felt not the ravaging burns, crawled across razorblades with glee nothing was sacred , and nothing was me Time wrapped me in a devilish cocoon hated the world , wanted the end soon, sent pain out asking for more in return wanted to fall, die and then slowly burn Then life made a sharp , sudden return I found her and no longer wanted to burn, why did this blessing enter my sad life why did she ever desire to be my wife Our merciful God gifts as he so desires to we that foolishly eat of the evil fires, gives generously of his fruitful trees hears all of our sobs, moans and pleas My life runs within a sure steady path I sleep so well, no fear of God's wrath, O' bright light that I finally get to see hand of God resting over an undeserving me! Robert J. Lindley note: Poetry must represent truth and heart...

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Date: 1/10/2015 3:05:00 PM
what a redeeming though so well scribed, Robert.. divine.. hugs!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 1/10/2015 9:40:00 PM
Thanks Nette. Good the hear from you my friend!
Date: 1/10/2015 10:16:00 AM
Hello Robert My Friend!! This is indeed a most excellent write with a quite sensitive and most poignant message. The good news is that your life now is on that " . . . sure steady path." (The technical aspects of this poem, including the rhyme, imagery, and pitch of the verse are picture perfect -- as always from you!!) This one's a "7" and a FAV from me!! (BTW, I just posted a narrative poem I wrote called: "JE SUIS CHARLIE -- Afterthought," if you're interested in reading it.) Best!! Gary
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Robert Lindley
Date: 1/10/2015 9:42:00 PM
Thanks Gary. Always value highly your comments my friend. I have already read and made a comment on that very fine and informative write my friend! Truth in your poetry always..

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