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Eat My Words

If you are hungry for words then why not eat mine? They are both sweet and sour, desperate yet full of hope. A raw wine is in them, and the unripe fruit of my soul. Bitter are they, yet let them season, mull them in a jar of awareness. They may in time enrich you, feed your being, then, if you are kind, return them to me, that I might consume, and taste a meaning, only you may discern.

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Date: 11/10/2023 10:33:00 AM
I smirked like I was chewing on an unripe grape soaked in lemon juice reading this. Something resonates - for me it's the bitter sweet external validation. If only I didn't like to feast on it I'm sure I'd be better all round... I'll probably never know. I liked this one - made me think (and do strange facial expressions) :)
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Eric Ashford
Date: 11/10/2023 11:08:00 AM
LOL Dilly, your response feels just right to me. According to Google - According to Google "If it is a young wine, a longer time exposed to air will help open it up to show more complexity and soften the tannins. If it is an older wine, a little time exposed to air will wake it up from its long slumber to revive its liveliness." I guess that says it all. Thanks, and Cheers mate! E

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