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I am the cherry On the cake I am the damsel in distress Wanton of affections I am the woman inside your thoughts Dancing in harmony to your hearts beating rhyme I am the lady in black Whom will mourn at your funeral I am the one who kisses the fool After all, tiss I who picked you Notes: Written from the woman's perspective ( I think )

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Jill Spagnola

Date: 4/28/2015 9:33:00 PM

Your visuals match your poetry so well I have greatly enjoyed each of your poems I have read thus far, Jill

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/30/2015 12:49:00 AM

Thank you Jill, I sure had fun with that!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/13/2015 11:05:00 PM

You did a good job on the Lady's perspective. 7

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/13/2015 11:08:00 PM

Thanks Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 3/12/2015 8:08:00 PM

I too love the final line - i proposed to my hubby .... say no more lol:-) a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/13/2015 11:07:00 PM

Thanks Jan! Hugs

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/12/2015 4:04:00 PM

A well structured poem with a emotional release launching it into our hearts. Emile.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/13/2015 11:06:00 PM

Thank you Emile!!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2015 6:16:00 PM

Interestingly done,Arthur. I especially like the last one!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/10/2015 8:57:00 PM

Thank you!

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 3/10/2015 12:10:00 PM

Your perspective is precise, this made me smile. Terrific write Arthur! Hugs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/10/2015 6:14:00 PM

Thank you Cecilia :)

Poesy Relish

Date: 3/10/2015 11:30:00 AM

It sure is from a womans perspective... being the damsel in distress, the cherry and the one who kisses the fool lol... :)... nice obe Arthur.. nad

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/10/2015 6:14:00 PM

Thank you :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/10/2015 12:14:00 AM

Well-written from the woman's perspective, Arthur, especially that last line. BTW, forgot to thank you for the sweet comment about my son in my avatar...hugs, Rhonda

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/10/2015 6:13:00 PM

Thanks Rhonda

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/10/2015 12:04:00 AM

It does sound like a woman's perspective:-) my fav line " I am the woman inside your thoughts Dancing in harmony to your hearts beating rhyme"

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/10/2015 6:13:00 PM

Thank you njeri