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Easy Heart

And this is why I have decided To leave It there Incongruity meets ignorance Your charms fall short Your words scar Unobtrusively Insistently You choose to see Through the lens Of yourself, and Nowhere close to me You choose to be Fooled By exactly what I am— To the unthinking, Merely Another Uncertainty meets unrest Your heart beats much too Near yourself Comfortably, Conveniently And this is why I have decided To leave It there

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Paloma P

Date: 10/7/2016 9:27:00 AM

I like the depth of emotion rendered, 5th verse is killer good.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/14/2016 12:10:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading, Paloma. ^_ ^ Really glad you appreciated that stanza. It's the heart of the poem. <3~Laura

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/6/2016 7:17:00 AM

Excellent. Very interesting and deep thoughts. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/14/2016 12:13:00 AM

And thanks for reading, Ravi. Means a lot. <3~Laura

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/5/2016 6:49:00 PM

Laura, WOW, this is a good write and I enjoyed how you showed he the placement of- how it should be... Always. LINDA

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/14/2016 12:15:00 AM

Thanks for the thoughts, PD! I need to go check out your page! You're work is always a treat for me to read. <3~Laura

James Inman

Date: 10/5/2016 7:24:00 AM

An interestingly deep write Laura. Your words suggest an unknowingly self centered individual but your fourth stanza twists this idea and makes me almost feel as if he sees you in his own light, not wanting to look deeper for fear of realizing that you are not who he believes you to be, scared, perhaps, that he can't accept the real you. Your layout is wonderfully conceived making the reader follow your intended flow forcing emphasis on specific words.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/14/2016 12:16:00 AM

Thanks James...gottah get back to your page - love your work. Thank you for your in-depth thoughts regarding this poem. <3~Laura

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 10/4/2016 3:05:00 PM

Great write this is Laura. Thanks for sharing..........A.M.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/14/2016 12:17:00 AM

Aw, thanks for taking the time to read it, Afolabi. Much love, <3~Laura

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/2/2016 3:29:00 PM

Oh sweetie! What a powerful write. Sometimes those whom we love can be self-absorbed. You have a tender heart. I see it through your writes...yet there is power there as well. A great write. Thanks for always commenting on my videos. You are so kind, dear. Hugs

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/14/2016 12:18:00 AM

I adore the videos, Eileen. They are very uplifting and wonderful. Thanks for taking the time to read this one. I need to get back to your page soon, and read some more of your work. Always a pleasure. <3~Laura