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~ each moment that I spend wrapped in your wings, means one less wasted 'midst those lesser things ~ * This is a new form I've created called "Rithimus Duo Tantum", which means simply, "rhyme two only", and is made up of two lines of Rhyme taken from a previously written piece in their original order. (This was taken from a poem called "Afflatus"). Not really a form as such in itself, as there are MANY two-lined rhymes already, but I intend to use it for upcoming contests I will run, and needed to give it a designation. *

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Date: 12/5/2020 3:51:00 AM
I love this ~ it has stirred up a wonderful memory :)
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Date: 11/17/2020 9:19:00 AM
You bring so many feelings to life with so few words.
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Date: 11/17/2020 8:17:00 AM
Greg ,congratulations on your win in Brian's 2 line contest, with this beauty _Constance
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Date: 11/17/2020 7:41:00 AM
This is too beautiful a write. A fav for me.
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Date: 11/17/2020 5:35:00 AM
Beautiful Greg, and I like the new form. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 11/16/2020 11:18:00 PM
I remember the Afflatus poem, Greg. Congrats for another winning gem. ~ John
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Date: 11/16/2020 6:34:00 PM
Superb! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/16/2020 5:44:00 PM
wow, Greg. it's hard enough finding FOUR great lines that stand on their own, but to have found two like this, Bravo! Congrats on a very well deserved win.
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Date: 11/16/2020 1:49:00 PM
Fantastic, beautifully written. Congratulations on your winning placement. :-)
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Date: 11/15/2020 7:20:00 PM
Yeah I'm lovin it...hey G you judged your contest yet!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/15/2020 7:42:00 PM
Thank you, John. No, I have not ... I would have posted the results.

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