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Splintered souls are rising and falling down below the reasons are not surprising but the outcome is still a blow watch out says the woodsmen blasting out kindled ashes mistaken are the poor men blocked by their fiery flashes cradled are the holy no less to feel the shame while the wicked cry out wholly taking all the blame failing to find the answers that lie within the sovereign tale bewitched by fevered lancers who quickly heard the bell to find the stifled sounds of their departed lives and plans foregoing spacious bounds banging in tin cans black-hole save them that drifted down roads of darkened sands who drink the cup they sifted and flee to more suited lands

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Date: 4/25/2021 11:36:00 AM
I was drawn to this one again. Well worth a second read.
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Date: 4/16/2021 8:37:00 AM
You offer us creativity, Angela, starting right from the title and ending with the last line of this thought provoking poem. ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 4/2/2021 9:31:00 AM
Poetry is flowing through your veins... Love the feeling you bring out.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 4/9/2021 6:36:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo :)
Date: 3/28/2021 9:32:00 PM
Powerful poem, Angela, the third stanza brings it all home to me.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 4/1/2021 3:59:00 PM
Thank you, Harry :)
Date: 3/28/2021 8:20:00 AM
As a child I used to ask my father - will the goodies win Daddy, I don't want the baddies to win - now my vocabulary has changed somewhat but the situation is still much the same! A battle between good and evil, very creative and oh so true! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 4/1/2021 3:58:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer :)
Date: 3/27/2021 1:32:00 PM
Extremely good pen Angela, nice rhyme and good imagery too. Have a lovely weekend, Gordon
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 4/1/2021 3:20:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon :)
Date: 3/26/2021 7:19:00 AM
I like the flow of this piece and the ominous undertow. Well expressed!
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 4/1/2021 3:10:00 PM
Thank you, Richard :)
Date: 3/25/2021 3:11:00 PM
Reasons are not surprising but the outcome is still a blow...sounds like a battle that has no winners. Intriguing write, Angela.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 3/25/2021 9:20:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay :)
Date: 3/25/2021 3:02:00 PM
A very introspective poem of people who seem adrift of what actions to take, like a battle of good and evil. May the good always win.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 3/25/2021 9:19:00 PM
Thank you, Victor :)

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