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Earth Prayers

Vespers of the falls, Exclaiming the earth’s past pains; Whispers in the mist.

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Sue Mason

Date: 8/14/2009 9:46:00 PM

One to slowly ponder here, Raul ... smile ...

James Fraser

Date: 8/14/2009 5:13:00 PM

A faith-full Haiku, extremely well written>>James

Jayne Eggins

Date: 8/8/2009 3:36:00 AM

whispers in the mist how ethereal and beautiful I loved this one ... love Jayne x x

Date: 8/6/2009 12:39:00 PM

Wonderful use of imagery for a creative perspective. Love the last line. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words on my poem. Keep up the good writing!!!! Karen

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/6/2009 10:09:00 AM

Another masterful work by you.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/6/2009 9:35:00 AM

Raul, when you get your book of Haiku's written please let me know. I wish to buy one. Grand Haiku as usual. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/6/2009 6:16:00 AM

Serenity speaks in this wistful, soft poem! Nicely done!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/6/2009 3:16:00 AM

i love your prayer-well penned Haiku king--charma

Charlene Bird

Date: 8/5/2009 9:39:00 PM

You are a master of the haikus Raul, this is such a compelling piece of elegant art that your have crafted. This goes to my favs!

Derrick Burton

Date: 8/5/2009 8:49:00 PM

beautiful poetry.... short and powerful, powerful and short. Enjoy your day.