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Earth is jinxed opposing

Butterflies renouncing their dreams... Birds with trimmed wings... Blood ocean... barren trees... burnt houses... Teared eyes... and shattered bodies…. Earth is ugly.... Earth is savage... Earth is but a jinxed place....!! Butterflies have reclaimed their thrones And the birds sore high and high up in the skies The oceans are clean, trees being green The kids are smiling, their bodies thriving The galactic relams dance in joy and peace As the earth evolves to a mother's lap For I may or may not be opposed poetry contest, sponsored by Di11y Da11y.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/17/2024 2:30:00 PM

I often try to decide which half I prefer to read. In this case it's a very tough choice since I believe the environment is stressed. We've actually been very lucky to this point. The truth doesn't have to be black and white. It's only mostly bad (lol) if you look at the facts.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/27/2024 10:03:00 AM

Haha that's true. And very unfortunate. Thank you

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/8/2024 1:11:00 PM

Hi Paghunda, how are you dear friend. this is such a refreshing write, 'The oceans are clean trees being green, The kids are smiling, their bodies thriving' . I love this write, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 1/15/2024 10:24:00 AM

Hi Jennifer, I am great Alhamdulillah. How about you ? Thank you for your visit Jenn. I really appreciate it

Valsa George

Date: 12/26/2023 9:40:00 PM

You have made a great choice and have brought a diametrically opposite scene of a clean and beautiful earth where everyone is happy and all are fine and joyous. Well done Paghunda.all the Best.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 1/15/2024 10:23:00 AM

Thanks Valsa

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2023 9:29:00 AM

Now THAT'S the way to do it

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 1/15/2024 10:22:00 AM

Thanks Andrea

Silent One

Date: 12/22/2023 12:01:00 PM

You opposed this poem very well creating words that that are poetic with a poem that means very different things..

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 1/15/2024 10:22:00 AM

Thank you for kind remarks SO