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Earth In Me

So much water, so much iron Alas, no gold, but copper by the ion Glows in my skin late summer days And tastes of blood and flint and maize Taste my salt, my spit, my hair Breath my tender air, my mollis aer Anoint me with a cloak of sweat And with my sword I will beget The earthy side of me, you see Nickel, zinc, ah, yet no mercury Take my dirt, my earth, my stones Build a castle with my bones. 21Mar14

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Date: 3/26/2014 3:35:00 PM
Nice... Verlena
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Date: 3/27/2014 6:23:00 AM
Thank you much, Verlena. This one was a fun write. Glad you enjoyed. Rick
Date: 3/25/2014 4:55:00 PM
This is awesome and definitely a 7 for me! Keep up with the excellent work. You are highly welcome to Poetry soup, a community of mind blowing, soul piercing and intrigue creating poets! I hope to check back on you again. This is really, really so good
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Date: 3/26/2014 6:23:00 AM
Thank you much, Funom.

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