Earth

I am to the Earth as the Earth is to me A mystery to man unlocked by a key We meet late at night beneath the moon Drunkard nude meanderings enough to make lovers swoon For the Earth has the key to my chastity belt Years of longing and teasing have made him quite svelte I crawl to his whim I answer his cry The Earth is my master no need to ask why.

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Rainbow Promise

Date: 1/21/2016 8:17:00 PM

What a masterpiece on Mother Earth! A 7. Thanks for sharing Kelli, I enjoyed this very much. At one time you take me to rhyme and then to lyrical too. Bravo. Thanks for your comment on my poem "The Seven Deadly". Didn't know how that would work out. For some reason there is no "Reply" button at my end. Best wishes, R P.

Kelli White
Date: 1/21/2016 8:51:00 PM

Ty so much RP. Glad you like reference to Word Warrior. Good luck. Kelli

White Sage

Date: 1/21/2016 6:01:00 PM

a beautiful Earth theme there Kelli...nice write

Kelli White
Date: 1/21/2016 6:04:00 PM

Ty WS,appreciate your stopping by,kelli

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/20/2016 1:51:00 PM

A fascinating piece Kelli chock full of metaphor. I love the line, '...Earth has the key to my chastity belt!' Well done!! Best wishes, Keith

Kelli White
Date: 1/20/2016 1:57:00 PM

Ty. Keith your thoughts and insight are very much appreciated, kelli