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Earth-2

Earth Mono syllables are potent But are best left untouched They call for a gargantuan grasp. For this monumental mono Commonplace,though With a contemporary spin, A monologue just wont do. And without a twin, Its original ware ,hard and soft , Ever a win-win Holder of holocausts Moulder of magnificence Fairly fed on presaging gods Fielding primordial fate Flourishing and floundering Female-male fecundity Llipid life limpet like stuck In non- finite lines, measured out And treasured nonetheless In miles and guiles, Millennia and manias Form: Freeverse 3 May 13 S.Jagathsimhan Nair For Giorgio's ' Impress me-5' contest. Motif: Philosophical, old poem

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 5/15/2013 5:18:00 PM

I see this one had a top placement, what did I tell you when I first commented? congrats jaggy, it's so well deserved :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/12/2013 7:00:00 AM

Here to congratulate you on your win, Jag. :)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 5/11/2013 10:58:00 PM

Wow Jag awesome. Many congrats friend.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/11/2013 4:29:00 PM

What so impressed me about your verse was that you actually 'ran' with the topic, I received way too many verses where the poets did not even delve the surface of the topics potential and YOURS did! Yours was about LIFE warts and all. BIG Congrad's for your originality. Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/11/2013 9:31:00 AM

Yes.........outstanding!!!! I am not surprised that this is on top! Congratulations!

Donna Jones

Date: 5/10/2013 9:20:00 PM

Yes much deserved win Jag...congratulations

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 5/5/2013 3:26:00 PM

jaggy, the combinations of words that you use are just sublime, and the alliteration is wonderful; impressive poetry as I would expect from you, deserving of a high placement :)