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Early Warning System

This is a test, this is only a test, of the early hubris warning system. The first fifty years or so you didn't pay any attention when we knocked you on your butt. With all the arrogance of youth you hopped right up and trivialized our warnings. "I'm good, what's the big deal? Take your best shot" Well our best shot would have left you Dead! What do you think about that? We gods reserve that for those of you too prideful to take a hint. You're not getting up so fast now. These little shots will do to remind you to get rid of that dam ego.

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Date: 11/29/2009 11:07:00 AM
Have a beautiful day and thank you for posting your fantastic poetry here for us to read Ahellas. Love,Carol
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Book: Shattered Sighs