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Early Spring Rain

early spring rain pelts a cherry tree... dousing young blossoms colored rainbow... sparks petals' hues with fragrant mist Debbie Guzzi's Spring Contest by nette onclaud ( revised)

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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 5/16/2014 9:11:00 PM
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Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, nette
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 5/16/2014 8:20:00 PM
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Those juxtaposed lines are the hardest! I spent so long just describing & my teacher would say "How is that a surprise or a revelation?" Of course I'd grumble! Congrad's on your win and trying so hard Light & love
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Harry Horsman
Date: 5/16/2014 5:42:00 PM
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love these nette, the visual aspect is amazing....
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/16/2014 12:58:00 PM
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There is nothing more refreshing that the scent of spring rain, flower petals, and fresh air. You have so much beauty in just six short lines. An amazing poem, Nette! Good luck in Debbie's contest!
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Linda Jackson
Date: 5/16/2014 7:51:00 AM
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Love the imagery. Congratulations. Linda x
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Lori Lucas Mcclure
Date: 5/16/2014 7:48:00 AM
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Awesome Haiku! Congratulations on your win! Lori
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/15/2014 9:20:00 PM
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these are so pretty. Big Congrats, Nette.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 5/14/2014 1:18:00 PM
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"flavored mist"............ such a incredible description....... so often I wish I had thought to use what I read in your poems !
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/14/2014 12:19:00 PM
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great write... I so love the rainbow in early spring rain... :O))
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Monterey Sirak
Date: 5/14/2014 6:18:00 AM
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Lovely! I love the fresh spring rains.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/14/2014 5:32:00 AM
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wow Nette!!! can i bee under the first stanza.. :) love it.. :), GBU, olive
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Leon Datu
Date: 5/13/2014 10:32:00 PM
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A soothing spring moment with a nicely-done pivot. Nette, thanks a lot for selecting my sijo in your contest! Soup mail.
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