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Hello empty space It's time to chase my old phase Muted by the happiness, sealed behind its shadow My mind overcome my hand, speechless within row to row The view of dismantled smoke The sound of soul's strokes Caressing my very morning Tempting every silence which almost abating Chewing inspiration which almost dried Try to find my old stride Jelous to see the rich mind But crawl from the bottom, I take my own sign Now say hello to the new lines The alter bridge of my confines Today still I write in dimly lit But this time I choose for not hiding it

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/9/2013 10:14:00 AM
Well worth the waiting it took to write this poem. Gems cannot be polished until they are mined, and that takes time. Well worth the patience... Love ya.... Jake
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Date: 9/5/2013 6:36:00 AM
Yanny, You have written the emotions of writing so well. The stages of wanting to write something but the mind keeps the thoughts at bay until finally you allow them to be written.
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Date: 9/5/2013 6:33:00 AM
This is so good, sometimes when I am at my most contented and happy I also find it the most difficult to write.
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Date: 8/16/2013 1:57:00 AM
- I say hello to you ... and thanks for the nice poem Yanny! - Have a nice day and a restful weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 9/4/2013 11:31:00 PM
Hello anne, it's been a while :) happy to see you stopped by, hopefully you have a wonderful day too :) hug, yanny

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