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Early Morning

flocks of birds fly in...
newly mown lawn wet with dew
ducklings waddle by
poor birds take flight frightfully...
then return to look for worms
03/22/2012 3rd Place Winner Black Eyed Susan "Tanka" Contest

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  1. Date: 6/2/2012 8:28:00 AM
    Morning is one of my favorite times, so the title caught my eye and I am so glad I read it. I am sitting outside right now listening to the birds... Take care. Janet

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 10:34:00 AM
    I can just hear the birds and smell the dewy lawn. Very nice. TLH

  1. Date: 4/20/2012 8:28:00 PM
    hmmm, I don't see any comment from me on this one. How did I miss it. So cute! and I'm glad to see you placed third with it. congratulations.

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 3:40:00 PM
    Hi Carol...I love the imagery in this piece : ) I wanted to thank you for all of your support and positive comments on my work over the years. You have always lifted me up.

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 5:20:00 AM
    Beautiful and nice write,Carol. Congratulations on your Olusegun.

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 2:15:00 PM
    Lovely imagery, Carol. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 4/3/2012 10:24:00 PM
    CAROL , Congratulations with your beautiful win, in B E Susan's contest.. Have yourself a good night. :-) , luv~PD

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 6:36:00 PM
    Congratulations Carol. Lovely Tanka. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 3:47:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 10:19:00 AM
    congrats Carol on a lovely win for these awesome words of visual delight luv..

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 9:26:00 AM
    Thank you

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 11:52:00 AM
    love this sweet write, my friend

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 6:46:00 AM
    Touching poem as we enter into spring time! God bless!!!

  1. Date: 3/26/2012 7:21:00 AM
    You paint a beautiful scene here Carol. We are sitting by the lake on a bench and I can see it in that park... Very nice.

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 12:20:00 PM
    nice descriptions - so many in so few lines! you really captured the scene here :)

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 10:27:00 AM
    my wife has enjoyed this poem from you and we had such a scene in our front of villa today in early morning. she has expressed she has enjoyed so well. Ron. and appreciates your prayers for us all.

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 9:19:00 AM
    I really enjoyed your description of early morning here, Carol :) The birds getting frightened was a very nice touch :) Enjoy your weekend!

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 8:41:00 AM
    lovely is this Carol. harry

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 7:07:00 AM
    Fun how everything feels more vibrant and alive in the "Early Morning", Carol! Many images here taking us with you on this morning jaunt. The "early morning"s has got to be my most favorite time of the day...thank you for sharing! Love, Mikki

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 2:42:00 PM
    This is a truly magnificent write my friend! My favorite line is a toss up between these two lines, "newly mown lawn wet with dew," and, "then return to look for worms" this first is just a natural setting that is so very visual and comforting, the second is quite humorous...I read your poem to my mom and she really laughed at the end. Though it may not have been meant for humor, it does have a humorous flair to it Carol! Please take no offense, as I mean none! I just love your poem! Great Work!

    Brown Avatar Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 3/22/2012 5:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No offense taken. I am glad you enjoyed it and very very happy it made your mother laugh. I love to make people happy. Love and blessings to you both, Carol