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Stars still twinkle With moon mingle Suddenly dawn breaks red The chilled air wraps And penetrates core But relaxes at same time It surrounds all of life Good emotions restored
Poetry form: xiaoshi-xiao means poetry, shi means little There are several ways to do this form, but I used this one: 8 lines, 3 characters per line(that is Chinese characters so I used more but it must be short) First two lines rhyme and the other six lines don't rhyme Should express emotions or feelings It can be written very similar to a Haiku but at least 6 lines long

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Date: 8/24/2023 3:33:00 AM
A very interesting poetic form and impeccably crafted poem.. This is definitely the epitome of gorgeousness, peace and subliminal magic of the early morning hues.. When the stars twinkle in the blooming shades of arriving dawn.. Such a beautiful tapestry! Lovely piece.. - Hiya :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/24/2023 3:43:00 AM
Hiya, Your visit lifts my spirits. Thanks for the visit and nice comment. Sara
Date: 8/20/2023 4:25:00 PM
What a wonderful creation, Ms. Sara. I was at peace reading your words about the dawn. It's my favorite time of day. I feel soothed and calm as I begin my walk every morning just before sunrise (except in winter :-) ) Sara Etgen-Baker
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/21/2023 2:14:00 AM
Yes, I can imagine a winter walk would bring about shivering, Sara. I don't think I would have the strength to do that one. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Date: 8/20/2023 5:38:00 AM
A distinguished poetic form ! You have encapsulated the full glory of the early morn. Reading this some lovely emotions are produced in me.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/21/2023 2:13:00 AM
So glad,Valsa. Early morning can give us good feelings if we let it. Thank you for you for your encouraging words. Sara
Date: 8/19/2023 2:35:00 PM
A fantastic poem Sara. What a great start to a new day. Emotions restored. Have a beautiful day.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/20/2023 3:20:00 AM
It was a nice Saturday, Jerry. Your comments has helped my Sunday start nicely. Sara
Date: 8/19/2023 2:09:00 PM
The eloquence and rhythm displayed in your choice of words and the overall composition of this poem are truly captivating, Sara. Your talent for crafting such beautiful words is just inspiring Anne. Good luck with the contest
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/20/2023 3:17:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad. Oh!! Not for a contest. Your visits are uplifting. Sara
Date: 8/19/2023 10:11:00 AM
Gotta love a beautiful morning sunrise after a refreshing night's rest. Very nice Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/19/2023 12:43:00 PM
Tom, For those of us who are morning people. Mornings are good not so much for the owls in this world. Thanks for the visit. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara
Date: 8/19/2023 9:04:00 AM
This is great Sara! Thanks for sharing :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/19/2023 12:42:00 PM
You are quite welcome, Heidi. Your visits are always uplifting. Sara

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