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Early Spring At Last

EARLY SPRING AT LAST Like a surly spoiled child giving up his toy ship, The dirty snow grudgingly gives ground, Is forced back and releases soiled grip, Revealing crocus ghost-shoots pale and round. Air is mild like a woman’s soft breath Feeding life anew to the tree’s bare skeleton Arms, fresh-wrested from death: And raising each hard green bud-scion. River free at last from immobility: Giant ice-shards’ gaunt mute motion In the flowing waters of felicity, Singing its joyful way to the ocean.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/17/2011 12:00:00 AM
this is superb,Sydney. time to fave you to my poets!!
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Date: 4/14/2011 7:09:00 PM
Great imagery Syd ... waiting for full bloom of Spring here to chase away snow mounds still luv..
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Date: 4/14/2011 4:00:00 PM
I love the comparison of the dirty snow to the spoiled child, Syd. Quite an original and imaginative write on the onset of spring! Can see so clearly the river turning from ice to water again. Awesome! Love, carolyn
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