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Early in the morning - no one else is awake except a squirrel stealing strawberries from my plant outside. Last year, you died. I grew a magic garden and cared for it with pride. Go away, squirrel. Early in the afternoon - no one else around except birds building nests in the trees by the gate. It is sometimes too late to piece things together, so why did I wait? Lucky birds. Early in the evening - no one else is crying except a voice in my head that is always regretting, never quite forgetting. Did you know I loved you as your sun was setting - dying early?

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Date: 6/22/2023 5:39:00 AM
Angela, thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Angela Maracle
Date: 6/25/2023 6:05:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words. I enjoyed writing it!
Date: 6/20/2023 8:07:00 AM
Hi Angela. I enjoyed your heartfelt poem of early death. For those of us who have journeyed there, no answers are easily forthcoming. I like the form you used. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Angela Maracle
Date: 6/22/2023 3:24:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words.

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