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Eagle Eyes

In my heart to know the right
Rite to sacrifice the dark of night
God above my only sight

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  1. Date: 5/17/2012 9:18:00 AM
    ..and after the night comes the wonder of day... a sublime piece, tim... you captured the essence of divine rite in such few words.. beautiful!.. i think this is a verse?.. huggs! :)

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 6:23:00 AM
    Interesting thoughts penned ...Enjoyed..Yes, God always knows and is there..Thanks for the kind and thoughtful review of my work..I appreciate the time spent there..When I was writing that one, I was thinking on more than just the wind and from what you said I feel that the presence came through into the work..Sara

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 10:19:00 AM
    Keep your eyes on the prize which isn't too far in the distance; I feel your words bring us closer to this reality Tim. So wise you are!

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 9:36:00 PM
    Awesome write my friend! I believe this to be a spectacular show of talent and love of writing! It's a wonderful and glorious poem Tim! By the way I believe the form to be monorhyme so you can take it off the dreaded I do not know form! You did excellent on this write...Great Work!!