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Eager For Fresh Air

eager for fresh air
sandman’s stardust fades nightmares flee through open panes – breeze ushers in sun squinting, I wake up memories of terror gone – bright, glorious day wrens on window ledge nature’s plentitude finds me – eager for fresh air
*It’s the escape from nightmares and the joy found in nature that make me dash out of bed. Entry for Ed Ebbs’ “What Makes You Wake Up Each and Every Day” contest. October 24, 2011

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Date: 11/28/2011 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Ed's "What makes you wake up each and everyday" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/25/2011 10:26:00 PM
A joy well worth looking forward to. Congratulations Carolyn
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Date: 11/2/2011 2:19:00 PM
What a lovely way to wake up every day - I'm like a zombie, LOL
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Date: 10/27/2011 8:16:00 AM
A refreshing poem here Carolyn.Enjoyed.Best wishes.
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Date: 10/25/2011 9:07:00 PM
This is a fantastic write, one of pleasant thoughts and perfect memories! I really enjoyed the line, "nightmares flee through open panes -" I really like that line!!Awesome job!!
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Date: 10/25/2011 8:26:00 PM
Do you really have nightmares? I always have pleasant dreams even when things are not so good in my life. Glad you are home. Thanks for your comments on my Cheater, Cheater poem. it was just that a contest entry. Did not pertain to anyone I know. I have trouble right now writing anything but sad poetry. Love, Joyce
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