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Dying While Living

Leaf lives while it dies. Drained of its quenching water, One drop at a time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/23/2010 9:45:00 PM
A fine haiku with nice imagery
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Date: 4/23/2010 6:34:00 PM
thought provoking poem--I like it!
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Date: 4/23/2010 5:01:00 PM
A good one for the contest, Marty! Good luck even though I doubt you'll be needing it! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 4/23/2010 11:26:00 AM
I like it!!!~~Rick
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Date: 4/23/2010 10:24:00 AM
Enjoyed the Haiku,,Irma
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Date: 4/23/2010 9:32:00 AM
very nice if for contest good luck well done faleshia
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