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Dying Too Young

The death angel visited her
Angels took her to heaven's gate
Where saints and angels were astir
In heaven's beauty now awaits

Angels took her to heaven's gate
Jesus said my sweet child come here
In heaven's beauty now awaits
Close to His throne she sings with cheer

Jesus said my sweet child come here
Where saints and angels were astir
Close to His throne she sings with cheer
The death angel visited her   

Written for Debbie Guzzi's 
Contest: When The Going
Gets Tough, The Tough 
Gets going
Written this 27th day of May, 2013

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  1. Date: 6/12/2013 1:10:00 AM
    Well I like this very much, and it's a winner ;} thank you for liking my " She Waits" , thank you for your always nice comments ;}

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 9:01:00 PM
    Congratulations on a fantastic win, Sara! This is very beautiful and definitely one for my favs. List. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 6:42:00 PM
    Hope you are well and enjoying summer! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 7:15:00 AM
    Congratulations Sara, very nice poem, Love Terry xoxo

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 3:41:00 AM
    hi and congrats Sara love, well done xx

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 8:15:00 PM
    Sara, very sad heartfelt poem, you capture the loss well. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 10:27:00 AM
    An excellent quill Sara. Very well written. Congrats to you on your well deserved win. AO

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 9:12:00 AM
    Representation of an angel is an assurance to heaven's gate. Godly words to glorify the reunion with our creator. Congratulations on your win, Sara. (^_^) Noel.

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 4:09:00 PM
    very good pantoum Sara.....winning wishes

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 6:25:00 AM
    gates,angels, and songs!. this is crystal like.good job. learned about your surgery only 2day.even though its been a while, accept my greeting.The Lord preserve you for us all.

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 1:03:00 AM
    great poem. BTW does the contest remind you of the song "Think of Laura"? Dying Young and all that...

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 11:27:00 PM
    Hope you do well with this in the contest Sara, it seems a worthy piece to me, enjoyed reading this morning..'

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 11:25:00 PM
    Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. All the best for contest. Tfs

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 8:11:00 PM
    A lovely write, Sara! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 6:35:00 PM
    This is what I think it confines too much .