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Dying Star

A dying star in the middle of nowhere Where there's no water, earth nor air No temple, no church, no mosque nor prayers Stood as I saw what she wears Nothing but the shining waves of a brown hair The green and the grey is a killer combination, I swear I'm helpless, this is not fair...

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Date: 2/15/2019 12:20:00 AM
An excellent debut poem on the soup. A fresh style, with the camera giving a new perspective. Look forward to reading more of your work. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 12/21/2018 9:23:00 PM
Your poem is gorgeously written. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope that you will share more poems, and soon.
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Heath Gebreek
Date: 12/22/2018 2:45:00 AM
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