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Dying Flower

"Despite how good you feel at the end the night// tomorrow's day will feel the same pain// if you dont fight// and change flight// your mind is only inclined// a quarter past five// running out of time// miles passed you by// chasing a high you no longer recognize// a beautiful flower dies inside// but why// a critical decline// but only infront of discreet eyes// that stay high// feet remain on the ground as you continue to try// and fly// not a touch of pain// in hearts veain// no more thoughts or mentality of going insane// and the feeling goes away// Sad days for others but hey// in your mind// at the moment// you are gone anyway// colored photos of you are fading to grey// i hope some way// you find your place// and save the day// that you piece together your mis takes// and once again learn the true game// of life// you have forgotten to play" - Curtis.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/30/2016 11:11:00 AM
Nice write, I can really identify.
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Date: 1/30/2016 1:51:00 AM
Hi Christian,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/30/2016 1:28:00 AM
Christian, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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