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Dying Dreams

City lights lure souls streaming by, giving steel and brick a fresh face. For only the young can supply the mortar that holds dreams in place. Busy roads form a maze of streets, where winos claim the parks as theirs. And panhandling when day retreats, beggars ignore folk's angry stares. Odors of life pollute the air, as a chemical sun sets low. And we share burdens all must bear, trapped under a smog's eerie glow. Shadow girls hustle day and night, selling pleasures of every type. And meant to whet your appetite, barmaids accentuate the hype. Ground by the pressure to achieve, innocence gets tangled in sin. And dying dreams draw the naïve, eager for their chance to begin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/16/2018 4:37:00 PM
Love these lines "dying dreams draw the naïve eager for their chance to begin."
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/17/2018 9:27:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/25/2015 7:41:00 PM
Love it, great write
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/26/2015 5:53:00 PM
Thank you Stuart, your support is welcome. Emile.
Date: 12/25/2015 2:28:00 PM
Wow, an engaging write that poses numerous questions. I can visualise the imagery as well. Fantastic write.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/26/2015 5:54:00 PM
Thanks so much Mark, your comments are welcome. Emile.
Date: 12/25/2015 12:28:00 AM
Loved this poem Emile, very deep and thought provoking!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/25/2015 11:33:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, I appreciate your comments. Emile.

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