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Dying

people thought she was alive
even she thought that she was alive
but her soul already knew she was not
she was dying inside
sometimes she feels it
but still tried to forget that feels
because she thought it was only a phase
until one day she was crumbling
it was hurting, she cannot breathe, she was crying
she was screaming, so loud, she was sobbing
and someone was coming, tying to help
she refused it, changed her mind just want to be alone
felt the pain, and realized
she was going to die, she knows it
all the bad thoughts came
try to kill her mind, her brain, her soul..
she was in between wanted to fight or just let they killed her
and she just let it all happened

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/20/2016 9:13:00 AM
Excellent poem Geovani. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 4/20/2016 2:45:00 AM
Hi Geovani, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs
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Date: 4/20/2016 2:23:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Geovani. :)
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Date: 4/20/2016 12:30:00 AM
Geovani, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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