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Dyes On the Skies

The clouds in their clothes Rock and roll, swirl and twirl With mighty might grace The moon in her race Salutes the skies, toughens ties Attraction that dyes Even tiny eyes Captures these moments up high As the sun's tail dyes Sponsor SKAT A Contest Name October Sky (three headed haiku)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/2/2015 12:16:00 PM
Enjoyed this string of haiku, Njeri. Attracted by the swirling clouds and "the sun's tail dyes". ~ Congratulations on a fine win. // paul
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/3/2015 8:39:00 PM
Thank you Paul for the congratulations :-)
Date: 9/2/2015 12:08:00 AM
Njeri, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/3/2015 8:37:00 PM
And thank you SKAT for giving me that chance. You are awesome
Date: 8/31/2015 9:09:00 AM
Njeri, nice write and some nice rhymes too.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/3/2015 8:36:00 PM
Thank you James. I appreciate the visit.
Date: 8/31/2015 5:07:00 AM
Wonderful string of haikus njeri ! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on big win! Thnx for visit to my page!
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/3/2015 8:35:00 PM
Thank Dr Upma. God bless
Date: 8/21/2015 10:52:00 PM
Great fun read all the best in the contest October Sky
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/3/2015 8:34:00 PM
Thank you Lewis. God bless
Date: 8/21/2015 7:30:00 PM
Njeri, lovely haikus for the contest and thanks for visiting my tree poem. .
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/3/2015 8:33:00 PM
Thank you Broken Wings. God bless

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