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Dusty Rain

Dusty Rain Puffs of random promise coldly awaken the hope of droughts thirsty ticket holders. Parched dust joins in pig-like, snout in the trough, dry tongued greeting. Satiations mud bath ensues leaves rub their hands together cupping cool water soothing the screaming roots. Flowers lean back rinse their colored tresses rejoice in the trickle of renewal. Worms lay – Cleopatra-like - self seeking mud worshippers freed from their dungeons. Puddled streets shiny rainbow hues search for the pot-o-gold of street signs end. Dandelions shake golden crowns mimic the sun, smile on the dream of future days. Garden Buddha, licks stoic lips, smiles cool trickles tickle his girth. Thin groundhog sleeps knowing his prized shoots will soon be plenty. Birds succumb to the perfume of petrichor, dance in fence top chorus line to the dusty drum beat of Spring rain. 6/5/2016 submitted to – ika-labing-tatlo(13th): Rain, Rain com my way – Poetry Contest sponsor – binibining P.iNK

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Date: 6/5/2016 8:48:00 PM
Your succulent words surprise and astound, so brilliant are they, dear John! I'm sit amazed at the wonderful and creative imagery expressed...7!
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John Lawless
Date: 6/5/2016 9:15:00 PM
Thank you Laura for the kind words and high mark. Actually, it is raining here in Boston today so the muse just looked out the window and wrote..
Date: 6/5/2016 8:48:00 PM
Forgot the rating :O
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Date: 6/5/2016 6:48:00 PM
So many, I have to say cute, stanzas that brought a grin of delight to me. I enjoyed the imagery very much, John ... CayCay
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John Lawless
Date: 6/5/2016 9:12:00 PM
an early spring rain should bring a grin to everyone's face. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment CayCay.
Date: 6/5/2016 4:48:00 PM
Great poem John, good luck in the contest. I love the worms being released from their dungeons. Kind regards, Craig
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John Lawless
Date: 6/5/2016 9:12:00 PM
Thanks Craig, I sometimes think the sound of the first spring rain calls the worms to ..... P A R T Y ......

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