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Dusty Glory Days

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A tired voice and less engaged You sit there nonchalantly Never noticing my glance As I casually look your way Sitting in awkward silence Downward weary eyes hollow As distant as your dusty smile You gaze off into the distance I imagine your glory days Spirited buoyant and cheerful So long ago and wonder Sizing up this empty shell before me Laden shoulders act as testimonial To long gone years of toiling Of struggling to survive Barely making ends meet Now one foot out the door Wishing somehow You had the strength To take the leap AP: 1st place 2021, 1st place 2021 Submitted on March 21, 2020 for contest STRAND CHOICE M sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on April 24, 2018

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Date: 3/21/2020 11:40:00 PM
I agree with Ralph's comment - poignant and pensive. Real food for thought. Congratulations Line on your win.
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Date: 3/22/2020 1:04:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sam. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/25/2018 11:45:00 AM
Poignant but bordering on Bravery. My compliments Thank you for your comment on my tunnel vision.
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Date: 4/25/2018 12:33:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Ralph. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/25/2018 11:30:00 AM
Such potent words, Line. I have witnessed this myself hoping that it is also not my destiny. Great poem xxoo
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Date: 4/25/2018 12:34:00 PM
I think you are safe, Mike. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment.
Date: 4/25/2018 11:23:00 AM
gut-wrenching and yet beaurifully handled from your spilled ink, vijay... huggs
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Date: 4/25/2018 12:35:00 PM
Thanks, nette, for your visit and comment.
Date: 4/24/2018 9:26:00 PM
So imaginative, empathetic, and ultimately forlorn-real. Shook me up a bit. ~ Gershon
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Date: 4/24/2018 9:57:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 4/24/2018 8:15:00 PM
You have just described my last visit with my father; somehow you knew. Sweet nostalgia for me.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/24/2018 8:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.
Date: 4/24/2018 8:11:00 PM
Enjoyed reading, line, hugs Eve
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/24/2018 8:25:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit, Eve.
Date: 4/24/2018 7:04:00 PM
That's a beautiful sad poem, Line, especially the ending sounds so hopeless. Well done.
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Date: 4/24/2018 7:39:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Agnes. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/24/2018 5:16:00 PM
Such an enjoyable poem to read, Line!!! Superb writing...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/24/2018 5:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robertina. Most appreciated.

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