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Dust Devil

It was a still day on the plains. Then all of a sudden the rains came followed by hot sunshine we sat and slowly sipped wine Then the wind blew dust devils that caused lots of grave perils up rooting trees along the plains and blowing hats down the levels. That dust devil was so uncivil as it left behind a load of drivel

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Date: 9/23/2023 10:37:00 PM
Wow you pull me in with imagery. I have never seen dust devils! Thanks for sharing.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/24/2023 4:11:00 AM
ty for reading Karen shame you have not seen one they are beautiful and sometimes deadly. hugs Shadow
Date: 9/23/2023 6:48:00 AM
Yes. as a kid I used to love to watch dust devils twirl across the plowed fields. Your poem gave such imagery an reminded me of my youth on the farm. Another fine poem you have gifted us. A fav. God bless you my friend.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/23/2023 7:27:00 AM
aw ty so much Robert you have made my day hugs and smiles Shadow
Date: 9/22/2023 4:20:00 PM
I can see it in my mind’s eye! Nicely done!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/23/2023 7:24:00 AM
Ty Kim hope you are keeping well hugs Shadow

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